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REDACCION TIEMPO LIBRE

In my free times, I like to be with my family, especially with my nephew and going for a walk with my boyfriend. My life is a bit stressing. Every morning I go to a nursery school instructor course and in the evening I attend English classes. I don't have much free time, and when I have, I spend it going to the cinema , walking on the beach, going out with my friends....

REDACCION MENORES DE 18 AÑOS A PRISION

In my opinion, I think that children under 18 should go to prison for committing any crime. Currently, those under 18s use their age to commit acts of bandrity. They take advantage that they can't be locked up in prison for being a minor, with which they are filled with satisfaction. Today, we have in Spain several insolved crimes that result from those under 18, as is the case of young Marta del Castillo, murdered by her boyfriend. This boy has spend months in prison, but still hasn't revealed  exactly where he hid the body of his girlfriend. This wouldn't have happened if the authorities had acted correctly. The same happen to most crimes comitted by children who still don't have a sentence. I think  that all minors who commit a crimme should be tried like an adult without any kind of indulgence.

 REDACCION DE UNA CARTA A UN AMIGO

Hi Sean, Good to hear from you. Sorry I haven't written before but I have been bunled working.Thanks for your e-mail. I'm glad that fit your studies and you master the Spanish to perfection. Sorry about your broken arm. I hope you are better. I would like t o know your family someday, so terll me it would be lovely.    I still haven't finished my exams, I lack some unfinished. However, I'm eager to finish. I'm working as a waiter in a restaurant to earn some money. i've been going out whit Carol. i really like her!  Anyway, this afternoon I stayed whit her to walk in the park.  Hope you are very good on holidays visiting your ount. Don't forget to send me a postcard.  We're going to the coast in July as well as spending a few days with my parents, so may be I'll see you in August  OK'

All the best.

Jeni



REDACCION VIVR EN UNA CIUDAD

I'm both pround to be a citizen of Spain, especially from the Cnry Islands.  On the one han, my country is one of the best in the world, but sometimes our priorities are all wrong. For instance, we have good weather, good environment, landscapes and beautiful landscapes, good human qualities. But there are ealso some disadvantages, such as poverty, pollution, lack ok healthcare, lack of money for these reasons. I feel ashamed of my country.  On the other hand, my country really is the land of freedom and opportunity.  Anyone with money can get what they want. We have a society with a different culture compared to others, with enjoy greater freedom. Althoug we can see that there is some racism in our country. However, we all have the same rights.  In conclusion, my country isn't quite perfect. In my opinion, there are more things to be pround of than ashamed of.

CONTAMINACION EN NUESTRA CIUDAD

Living in a city has its advantages and disadvantages. One the one hand, the city is located in the center, accessible to everywhere.  It's surrounded by all kinds of industries, gas stations, highways of all kinds, many shops where people do their shopping, nightlifes centers, many cars go to and from, the port where the boats enter and leave, etc  On the other hand it also has disadvantages inncluding pollution caused by the industries, cars, noise and odors. In conclusion, we cherish that our city has to be less polluted to have better air breathe.

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